If you're flitting round Boston today, fly on over to the Peabody Museum at Harvard University. Our book launch for Mysteries in the Maya Calendar Museum is today at 3:30. All welcome.
Chirpings about writing and kidlit, editing and grammar, process and inspiration...with birds.
Friday, December 7, 2012
Wednesday, December 5, 2012
Funky Birdlings
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© Lesley Breen Withrow
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Leslie and her family live right here in Rhode Island, and her husband Steven Withrow is the co-producer of the uber fabulous Library of the Early Mind, a documentary that explores children's literature and its vital importance. If you care about kids' books and kids' minds, it's a must see: http://www.libraryoftheearlymind.com/About.html It's also very entertaining.
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Monday, November 26, 2012
The Path to Publication
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| Image by me. |
Very recently, a writer asked me to be honest about whether he should continue to pursue writing or not. It’s not the
first time I’ve been asked that question. It always catches me very off guard,
but it does make me want to say what follows:
I’m really not the one you should be
asking.
It would be the height of arrogance and stupidity for
me—or anyone else—to suggest someone not pursue writing. We all start
somewhere, and we all have quite a learning
curve. Everybody. If we write, it’s because we are writers. And so we must write (or paint or sculpt or garden
or whatever) or shrivel up and die a bitter, strangled creative/spiritual
death.
But should we ‘pursue’ it…which I
assume really means ‘pursue publication’?
When I was a younger, less experienced
editor (and probably thought I knew more than I did, as is natural), I worked with
a gentleman who was determined to be an author. He was incredibly eager, earnest,
and gung-ho, but he just seemed to be starting in a difficult place. His work
seemed a bit… well, unpublishable. But he just wanted to keep trying, no matter what the critique.
And so he did.
We kept working together, multiple
drafts of first one book and then
another, both of us learning much along the way. Beneath the unpublishable veneer
of what he was doing, there was something wonderful and inspired and rich in
what he thought and felt and cared about. But it was just all coming out in ways
that were not working at all. In truth, I didn’t think his chances of ever getting
published were very good. I was almost certain he wouldn’t, in fact, even though
I wanted it for him. But he loved it and wanted it for himself, and that’s all
he saw in front of him (or so it seemed to me). So no matter what, he just kept
on.
I don’t know what ups and downs he
went through on his private journey as a writer, but I guess they’re the ups and downs
we all go through. The self-doubt and the frustration, the elation and late nights.
All I saw was his consistent drive, the revising, the eagerness, the upbeat
attitude, the desire, the focus, and the pleasant, grateful willingness to listen
intently, to learn every single thing he could. When he was ready he let go of
ideas he’d tried and which he now understood weren't working. He tried new things that incorporated new knowledge. He
was willing and ego-free and hardworking.
And he quickly proved me wrong. He grew. His work became good, then really good (in my humble opinion). It was amazing and wonderful to watch. He soon did what I had not
managed to do at that point: he found a publisher who wanted his book, signed the
contract, and produced a very saleable story with a lovely heart and appealing vehicle.
I’ve never seen a writer with such a short journey to (traditional) publication.
(Sure, it took years, but not even close
to double digits like most of us.)
He might well have wondered if he’d
ever be a published writer. He never discussed that with me. Yet he knew he would, no matter how long or
how hard the journey. He was the only one he needed to ask.
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Thursday, October 4, 2012
Musical Interlude: Take Shelter
Hello.
Sure, it's been a while. Sometimes, life's like that, isn't it?
Sometimes, one just has to step away a little bit, find a little shelter from all the noise.
And so, with that in mind, a little music for writing. Wear headphones and turn it up.
I hope you find it as evocative as I do.
Sure, it's been a while. Sometimes, life's like that, isn't it?
Sometimes, one just has to step away a little bit, find a little shelter from all the noise.
And so, with that in mind, a little music for writing. Wear headphones and turn it up.
I hope you find it as evocative as I do.
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Sunday, March 11, 2012
What’s in a Name? Or… With Apologies to Those Named “Milt”
| Birthplace of the character formerly known as "Milt" |
I
don’t usually spend a great deal of time thinking about the names of
characters. They usually just seem to fly out of the ether, I insert them, and
they stick, or at least that has been my experience.
So when I began the story I’m
writing now, I didn’t think too much of it when one of my major characters decided
he’d be Milt. I stuck the name in, and kept writing. As time went on—despite
growing ever more excited about the story and knowing Milt was going to be
quite important—I found myself not that interested in writing the scenes
with Milt in them. I rationalized that it was because though Milt is very
important, he’s not physically present for a lot of the book.
But as time has gone on, and the
first half has taken a more solid shape, I started to wonder if I was actively avoiding
him. I had trouble knowing who he was. He was coming across as sniffly. He
seemed thin, too tall, too often pushing a pair of glasses back up onto his
nose. Oh no, he was growing buck teeth and a lisp and telltale bumps, which would
soon be pimples. He was a stereotype of a sidekick, and a weak, uninteresting
foil for my MC. I couldn’t get hold of him, and I really had no desire to.
Then in Australia, on a long train ride
in the Outback, though hot little rural towns and vast parched fields spotted
with sheep and huge old gum trees, I had a little epiphany. It felt that the character I wanted Milt to
be would thrive in this kind of demanding environment. I could see him climbing
over the rusted car bodies and water tanks beside the train line, chasing his
mates through the bush, roaring like a dragon. He was gravely voiced, shortish,
and stocky,
tough and quick with a grin—and he most certainly was not named
Milt.
Another name began to whisper, to
shout, and then take hold. About two weeks ago I replaced “Milt” with this other
name (which still starts with M). It’s one of the
best writing decisions I’ve ever made. I know who he is at last and it has
opened up new dialogue, new scenes, and unraveled parts of my plot I had no
idea about. It has affected the entire project.
What’s in a name? If my experience is anything to go by, a lot when it comes to your characters.
They have to resonate for you—and if they do, I think they’ll have a
better chance of resonating for your audience, because you will know them. You’ll
better convey who they really are to your reader.
Friday, March 9, 2012
A Novel Update: Flowing
| Cockatoo I chatted with in Australia. See how happy she is? |
I am on top of the world.
Sticking to this writing every day
routine is doing wonderful things. I’m invested in my work and engaged by it. I
look forward to it every day now, because most of the time it’s flowing. I’m
sure that has a lot to do with my mental commitment to it.
The evening before last I actually found myself multitasking in a most extraordinary way: I was cooking dinner, Skype chatting with my mum, and writing furiously, all at the same time. That's when I know it's really flowing. Feels amazing.
The evening before last I actually found myself multitasking in a most extraordinary way: I was cooking dinner, Skype chatting with my mum, and writing furiously, all at the same time. That's when I know it's really flowing. Feels amazing.
And I did Something Really Big. I
changed a major character’s name. It’s had a dramatic effect on him and on my story. I’ll share my thoughts about that soon.
2+ hours a day (or at least >
one). 6+ days a week. It’s key.
Current word count: 31,007 (+4583)
Current state:
- solid short synopsis
- clear overarching plot in mind
- sketches for three illustrations
- solid beginning (with small gaps) and established voice…but this week it’s grown and changed. The beginning starts in a new place. It’s better.
- vastly messy middle with large gaps, clearer plot points, a growing number of characters, and various black holes but many fewer toward the end.
- and an ending! Even final a line!
Goal: A finished solid first draft by January
9th, 2013.
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Friday, March 2, 2012
Novel Update: The Key is Key!
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| http://www.allthingsdesigner.com.au/shop |
One week
ago told you I'd found the key. This week, further proof that the key works. It works, I’m telling you.
Actually
sitting in front of a computer and making something go onto the screen every
day—yeah, really every day even
when you don’t really feel particularly like it but you know you’ve made apromise to do it and you’re accountable to a bunch of people who read your blog
as well as yourself and let's face it you're a bit pig-headed about these things anyway so you do it except on your one day off which is at your discretion—actually
produces results.
I know! Who
would have thunk it? Astounding, but true.
2+ hours a day (or >
one). 6+ days a week. It’s key.
Current word count: 30,092 (+3668)
Current state:
- solid short synopsis
- clear overarching plot in mind
- sketches for two illustrations
- solid beginning (with small gaps) and established voice
- vastly messy middle with large gaps, clearer plot points, a growing number of characters, and various black holes but many fewer toward the end.
- and an ending! Even final a line!
Goal: A finished solid first draft by January 9th, 2013.
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novel update,
writer's block,
writing,
Writing process
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